Audience Feedback on Final draft Music Video

This video is one of my peers giving me feedback on my final draft music video, she mentions that i could shoot some more outdoor to balance out the music video, furthermore she comments on how I can improve the beginning by adding the same shot I included in the at the end to create a circular narrative.
In addiyion, she believes the ballet performance is very effective. She also mentions the lighting and the wide range of the camera shots which contrast the ballet performer and the performer.